Thursday, September 11, 2008

Response Letter

I read E.M."s letter about Kid Pharaoh. I like how she quoted him, " Guys like me are the nucleus of the street.", Everybody is scared because they watch all the nonsense on television.", and " Do you believe in god? I really don't. Who was Jesus Christ?" These quotes give people who haven't read the story an idea of what type of guy Kid Pharaoh is. I think she did a good job of quoting Kid Pharaoh and giving her opinion about him after each quote. I think she could have better describe his character. You know he's rich, snobby, a bully, and racist, but overall I thought it was a good letter.

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